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\section*{Paper Information}

\textbf{Paper Title:} Corporate Complicity and Digital Accountability: A Mixed-Methods Analysis of the Tech for Palestine Boycott Dataset (2023--2025)

\textbf{Review ID:} review_20251124_120038

\textbf{Generated:} 2026-07-22 12:22:37

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\section{AI Reviewer 1 - Comprehensive Review}

As an expert peer reviewer for a high-impact journal, I provide this comprehensive review following the specified evaluation framework.

\textbackslash{}#\textbackslash{}# 📄 Step 1. Summary of the Paper

This manuscript analyzes the "Tech for Palestine boycott dataset" (2023-2025) documenting 197 technology companies allegedly complicit in the Israeli occupation of Palestinian territories. The paper employs a mixed-methods approach combining quantitative analysis of company attributes with qualitative coding of corporate communications and activist responses. The authors claim to demonstrate how grassroots data initiatives function as accountability mechanisms where traditional justice systems are obstructed, offering a framework for understanding digital complicity in asymmetric power dynamics.

\textbackslash{}#\textbackslash{}# 🔬 Step 2. Evaluation Criteria

\textbackslash{}#\textbackslash{}#\textbackslash{}# 1. Originality / Novelty
**Score: 6/10**

The application of mixed-methods analysis to this specific dataset represents a moderate contribution. While research on corporate complicity in human rights violations exists, the focus on technology companies in the Palestinian context provides some novelty. However, the theoretical frameworks employed (decolonial theory, epistemic justice, digital witnessing) are well-established in critical studies, and the methodological approach follows standard mixed-methods protocols without significant innovation.

\textbackslash{}#\textbackslash{}#\textbackslash{}# 2. Scientific Rigor / Methodology
**Score: 4/10**

**Major Concerns:**
- The risk scoring system (1-5 scale) lacks clear operationalization and validation procedures. The paper provides insufficient detail on how risk scores were assigned, by whom, and with what inter-rater reliability.
- The sampling is entirely based on a pre-existing activist dataset without independent verification of inclusion criteria or representativeness.
- Statistical analysis is limited to descriptive statistics and Spearman correlations without addressing potential confounding variables or employing more sophisticated analytical techniques.
- The qualitative analysis, while following standard thematic analysis procedures, shows potential for confirmation bias given the explicitly decolonial theoretical framing.

\textbackslash{}#\textbackslash{}#\textbackslash{}# 3. Clarity \textbackslash{}& Presentation
**Score: 7/10**

The paper is generally well-structured and clearly written, with logical progression through introduction, methods, results, and discussion. Tables are informative, though some could be better integrated with the text. The abstract accurately represents the paper's content without significant overstatement. However, the heavy reliance on activist terminology and explicit political positioning may challenge conventional scientific neutrality expectations.

\textbackslash{}#\textbackslash{}#\textbackslash{}# 4. Reproducibility \textbackslash{}& Transparency
**Score: 3/10**

**Critical Flaws:**
- No access to the primary dataset is provided for independent verification.
- Coding procedures for both quantitative and qualitative components are inadequately detailed.
- The risk assessment methodology lacks transparency in criteria and application.
- No mention of data/code availability for replication.
- Statistical analyses, while described, cannot be verified without access to raw data.

\textbackslash{}#\textbackslash{}#\textbackslash{}# 5. Significance \textbackslash{}& Impact
**Score: 8/10**

The paper addresses an important and timely issue regarding corporate accountability in conflict zones. The potential impact is significant for human rights advocacy, corporate governance, and international law. The documentation of specific technology companies and their alleged roles provides concrete evidence that could influence policy discussions and corporate behavior.

\textbackslash{}#\textbackslash{}#\textbackslash{}# 6. Ethics \textbackslash{}& Integrity
**Score: 5/10**

While the authors acknowledge ethical considerations, several concerns remain:
- The use of an explicitly activist dataset raises questions about objectivity and potential bias.
- Corporate allegations are presented as established facts without sufficient caveats about the contested nature of some claims.
- The paper's explicit political positioning challenges conventional academic neutrality, though this may be intentional given the decolonial framework.
- No evidence of IRB approval or ethical review for research involving potentially sensitive corporate allegations.

\textbackslash{}#\textbackslash{}# 🧪 Step 3. Specific Suggestions for Improvement

\textbackslash{}#\textbackslash{}#\textbackslash{}# Major Revisions Required:
1. **Methodological Transparency**: Provide complete documentation of the risk scoring methodology, including detailed criteria, scoring procedures, and validation measures.
2. **Dataset Access**: Make the dataset available for peer review or provide detailed inclusion criteria and verification procedures.
3. **Statistical Rigor**: Employ more sophisticated statistical analyses beyond descriptive statistics and correlations. Consider regression analyses controlling for relevant covariates.
4. **Bias Mitigation**: Address potential confirmation bias through more explicit reflexivity statements and consideration of alternative explanations.
5. **Corporate Perspective**: Include or acknowledge attempts to gather corporate perspectives beyond public statements.

\textbackslash{}#\textbackslash{}#\textbackslash{}# Minor Revisions:
1. Improve integration of tables with textual explanations.
2. Clarify theoretical contributions beyond application of existing frameworks.
3. Standardize citation format (some references appear incomplete).
4. Reduce reliance on activist terminology in favor of more neutral academic language where possible.

\textbackslash{}#\textbackslash{}#\textbackslash{}# Additional Analyses to Strengthen:
1. Conduct sensitivity analyses for the risk scoring system.
2. Perform network analysis of corporate relationships and supply chains.
3. Include temporal analysis of corporate responses to documentation efforts.
4. Consider comparative analysis with other conflict contexts.

\textbackslash{}#\textbackslash{}# 📊 Step 4. Final Decision \textbackslash{}& Justification

\textbackslash{}#\textbackslash{}#\textbackslash{}# Final Score: 5/10

\textbackslash{}#\textbackslash{}#\textbackslash{}# Recommendation: **Reject**

\textbackslash{}#\textbackslash{}#\textbackslash{}# Justification:

This manuscript addresses an important and timely topic with potential policy significance. However, fundamental methodological flaws preclude publication in its current form in a high-impact journal. The lack of transparency in data collection, risk assessment procedures, and statistical analysis undermines the scientific validity of the findings. The complete dependence on an activist dataset without independent verification or access for peer review represents a fatal flaw for rigorous scientific evaluation.

While the paper makes valuable contributions to discussions of corporate accountability and digital human rights documentation, the methodological limitations are too substantial for publication without complete restructuring and additional empirical work. The authors should address the major concerns regarding methodological transparency, data accessibility, and analytical rigor before resubmission.

The paper might be more suitable for publication in advocacy-oriented or interdisciplinary journals with different methodological standards, but for a high-impact scientific journal requiring rigorous peer review, the current version does not meet the necessary standards of scientific validity and reproducibility.

**Note**: This recommendation is based solely on scientific merit and methodological rigor, not on the political content or ethical positions expressed in the paper.

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\section{AI Reviewer 2 - Critical Review}

**Reviewer 02 Assessment**
**Paper:** CORPORATE COMPLICITY AND DIGITAL ACCOUNTABILITY: A MIXED-METHODS ANALYSIS OF THE TECH FOR PALESTINE BOYCOTT DATASET (2023–2025)

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\textbackslash{}#\textbackslash{}#\textbackslash{}# **1. Overall Impression**

**Immediate Reaction:** The manuscript addresses a timely and politically charged topic with clear humanitarian relevance. However, it presents as an advocacy document masquerading as academic research. The framing is heavily partisan from the outset, using loaded terminology ("colonial control," "digital apartheid," "structural violence") that undermines scholarly objectivity. While the mixed-methods approach is appropriately chosen, its execution appears designed to confirm pre-existing conclusions rather than test hypotheses.

**Breakthrough vs. Incremental:** Incremental at best. The application of mixed methods to a novel dataset could have been valuable, but the analysis lacks the critical distance required for Tier-1 publication. The core finding—that a boycott movement documents corporate involvement—is self-evident from the dataset's origin.

**First Impression Summary:**
- *Strengths:* Addresses an understudied intersection of technology ethics and human rights; comprehensive dataset; methodologically ambitious.
- *Concerns:* Severe confirmation bias; weak causal claims; polemical framing that compromises scholarly rigor; inadequate handling of positionality.

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\textbackslash{}#\textbackslash{}#\textbackslash{}# **2. Technical \textbackslash{}& Scientific Assessment**

**A. Problem Definition**  
**Score: 2/5**  
- The humanitarian motivation is clear but presented as axiomatic rather than critically examined.  
- Fails to substantively engage with counterarguments about technological neutrality or economic interdependence.  
- Research questions are descriptive rather than analytical, focusing on "how" activists document complicity rather than testing the validity or impact of these claims.

**B. Methodological Soundness**  
**Score: 1/5**  
- **Fatal Flaw:** Risk scores (1-5 scale) are assigned based on the authors' interpretation of secondary sources, introducing extreme subjectivity. No validation of these scores against independent standards.  
- **Cherry-picking:** Exclusive reliance on sources aligned with the boycott movement's perspective (Amnesty, HRW, Who Profits) while ignoring industry or government perspectives.  
- **Circularity:** Using the dataset to analyze the dataset's own categorization scheme.  
- **Statistical Overreach:** Correlation matrices imply causation where none is established. Spearman's rho between "risk scores" and "NGO mentions" is tautological—both measure the same underlying bias.

**C. Results \textbackslash{}& Evidence**  
**Score: 1/5**  
- **Reproducibility Crisis:** No access to raw coding scheme or inter-rater reliability measures for qualitative analysis.  
- **Missing Controls:** No comparison with technology companies not in the dataset to establish what distinguishes "complicit" from "non-complicit" firms.  
- **Exaggerated Claims:** Statements like "transforms digital traces into verifiable evidence" are unsupported—the evidence remains circumstantial and interpretation-dependent.  
- **Baseline Failure:** No engagement with literature on false positives in corporate complicity documentation.

**D. Contribution to the Field**  
**Score: 2/5**  
- Documents an existing social movement but offers little theoretical advancement beyond applying established concepts (digital witnessing, epistemic justice) to a new case.  
- Unlikely to be cited beyond advocacy circles due to methodological limitations and partisan framing.  
- Fails to engage with business ethics literature on supply chain responsibility in meaningful depth.

**E. Writing \textbackslash{}& Presentation**  
**Score: 3/5**  
- Logically organized but persistently uses advocacy language that undermines scholarly tone.  
- Tables are clear but often present subjective scores as objective data.  
- Abstract and introduction frame conclusions as premises.

**F. Ethical \textbackslash{}& Transparency Standards**  
**Score: 2/5**  
- No IRB mentioned (human subjects risk in analyzing activist communications?).  
- No data/code availability statement—critical for verifying subjective coding.  
- **Questionable Practice:** Presenting interpretation-laden risk scores as quantitative "findings" borders on misrepresentation.

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\textbackslash{}#\textbackslash{}#\textbackslash{}# **3. Strengths**

- Timely topic at intersection of technology ethics, human rights, and corporate accountability
- Comprehensive compilation of diverse data sources
- Appropriate choice of mixed-methods design for complex phenomenon
- Acknowledges positionality (though inadequately addresses its implications)

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\textbackslash{}#\textbackslash{}#\textbackslash{}# **4. Weaknesses**

**Major Flaws:**
1. **Circular Analysis:** Using activist-curated data to validate activist perspectives without independent verification.
2. **Subjectivity Masked as Objectivity:** Unvalidated risk scores presented as quantitative evidence.
3. **Confirmation Bias:** Exclusive reliance on ideologically aligned sources.
4. **Causal Overreach:** Implies but never demonstrates that documentation leads to accountability.
5. **Theoretical Superficiality:** Name-drops decolonial theory without rigorous application.

**Minor Flaws:**
- Inconsistent citation formatting (e.g., "?" placeholders in references)
- Repetitive description of methods in Results section
- Vague definitions of key terms like "distributed responsibility"

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\textbackslash{}#\textbackslash{}#\textbackslash{}# **5. Recommendations for Improvement**

**Required for Resubmission Anywhere:**
1. **Independent Validation:** Have risk scores coded by researchers unfamiliar with the boycott movement and measure inter-rater reliability.
2. **Control Group:** Analyze a matched sample of technology companies not in the dataset to identify what factors actually predict inclusion.
3. **Alternative Explanations:** Systematically engage with counter-narratives about technological neutrality, economic development, and security needs.
4. **Methodological Transparency:** Publish full coding scheme, raw data, and analysis scripts.
5. **Neutral Framing:** Rewrite using scholarly rather than advocacy language throughout.

**What Would Make It Acceptable:**
- Transform from descriptive documentation to analytical framework testing hypotheses about what distinguishes documented companies from peers.
- Replace subjective risk scores with objective measures (e.g., contract values, technical specifications).
- Engage substantively with business and legal scholarship on complicity standards.

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\textbackslash{}#\textbackslash{}#\textbackslash{}# **6. Verdict**

**Overall Score: 1/5 - Strong Reject**

**Justification:** This paper suffers from fatal methodological flaws that cannot be addressed through revision. The core analysis is circular: it uses activist-curated data to validate activist perspectives while presenting subjective interpretations as objective findings. The unvalidated risk scoring system and exclusive reliance on ideologically aligned sources demonstrate confirmation bias that undermines any claim to scholarly rigor. While the topic is important, the approach is more advocacy than academia. A Tier-1 journal cannot publish research where the methodology guarantees the predetermined conclusions. The authors should consider publishing in advocacy venues or completely reconceptualizing the study with proper controls and validation.

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**Reviewer 2 Style Compliance:**  
- Skeptical stance maintained throughout  
- Demanded justification for subjective methodological choices  
- Highlighted ethical concerns about presentation of advocacy as analysis  
- Unforgiving of circular reasoning and confirmation bias

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\section{Human Reviewer}

Reviewer: Shahid

Scores (out of 10):
- Question 1: 1.5
- Question 2: 1
- Question 3: 0.5
- Question 4: 0.75
- Question 5: 1
- Question 6: 1
- Question 7: 1.5

Total Score: 7.25 / 10

Reviewer Notes:


Submitted at: 2025-12-24 18:15:24


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\section{Aggregate Report}

Aggregate Review Report

This report combines the assessments from all three reviewers:

Individual Scores:
- AI Reviewer 1 (Comprehensive): 6.0 / 10
- AI Reviewer 2 (Critical): 0.0 / 10
- Human Reviewer (Shahid): 7.25 / 10

Aggregate Score: 4.42 / 10

Overall Assessment:
The paper received an average score of 4.42 out of 10 across all three reviewers.

Final Decision: Major Revision

Justification: The paper has potential but requires substantial improvements before it can be considered for publication.

Generated: 2026-07-22 12:22:37


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