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\title{\textbf{``They Call It Defense'': News Discourse on Civilian Harm in Gaza}}
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\section*{Paper Information}

\textbf{Paper Title:} ``They Call It Defense'': News Discourse on Civilian Harm in Gaza

\textbf{Review ID:} review_20251127_215740

\textbf{Generated:} 2026-06-15 10:06:46

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\section{AI Reviewer 1 - Comprehensive Review}

\textbackslash{}# Peer Review of "THEY CALL IT DEFENSE": NEWS DISCOURSE ON CIVILIAN HARM IN GAZA

\textbackslash{}#\textbackslash{}# 🔍 Step 1. Summary of the Paper

This paper examines how international news organizations construct credibility in their coverage of civilian harm in Gaza from 2014-2025. Through mixed-methods analysis of 3,338 news articles, the authors claim to identify patterns in credibility construction through institutional references, legal frameworks, and measured language. The paper asserts that neutral/mixed-toned reporting dominates (81.2\textbackslash{}%), with credibility established through systematic verification practices and institutional validation. The authors position their contribution as developing a replicable framework for analyzing trust signals in humanitarian crisis reporting and understanding how epistemic trust functions in high-stakes conflict coverage.

\textbackslash{}#\textbackslash{}# 🔬 Step 2. Evaluation Criteria

\textbackslash{}#\textbackslash{}#\textbackslash{}# 1. Originality / Novelty
**Score: 6/10**

The study applies established mixed-methods approaches to a contemporary conflict context, but the core methodological framework—combining sentiment analysis with discourse analysis—is well-established in media studies. The temporal scope (2014-2025) provides some novelty, particularly the inclusion of recent coverage up to 2025. However, the theoretical foundations in epistemic justice and media framing are extensively documented in existing literature. The application to Gaza coverage builds on substantial prior research in conflict reporting.

\textbackslash{}#\textbackslash{}#\textbackslash{}# 2. Scientific Rigor / Methodology
**Score: 5/10**

**Major Concerns:**
- The sampling methodology is inadequately described. The paper mentions "publicly available international news sources" but provides no specific outlets, selection criteria, or geographic distribution.
- Lexicon-based sentiment analysis for conflict reporting is problematic without validation against human coding, especially given the nuanced language of humanitarian crises.
- The claim of analyzing articles up to 2025 in a 2024 submission raises temporal validity questions.
- No intercoder reliability measures are reported for qualitative analysis, despite complex coding categories.

**Strengths:**
- The mixed-methods design is appropriate for the research questions.
- The large dataset (3,338 articles) provides substantial quantitative basis.

\textbackslash{}#\textbackslash{}#\textbackslash{}# 3. Clarity \textbackslash{}& Presentation
**Score: 7/10**

The paper is generally well-structured and follows conventional academic organization. The writing is clear, though occasionally dense with theoretical terminology. Tables are informative but some lack necessary context (e.g., Table 1's aggregation of 2023-2024 data obscures important temporal variations). The abstract accurately represents the study, though it slightly overstates the methodological innovation.

\textbackslash{}#\textbackslash{}#\textbackslash{}# 4. Reproducibility \textbackslash{}& Transparency
**Score: 3/10**

**Critical Deficiencies:**
- No code or data availability statement
- Insufficient detail on sentiment analysis lexicon or validation
- Missing operational definitions for key variables (e.g., "bias score" derivation)
- No sampling frame details for news outlets
- Qualitative coding framework not provided in sufficient detail for replication

\textbackslash{}#\textbackslash{}#\textbackslash{}# 5. Significance \textbackslash{}& Impact
**Score: 7/10**

The topic addresses an important and timely issue in conflict reporting and humanitarian communication. The findings could inform journalistic practice and media literacy education. However, the impact is limited by methodological limitations and the specialized focus on English-language international media. The potential contribution to understanding credibility construction in asymmetric conflict reporting is substantial if methodological issues are addressed.

\textbackslash{}#\textbackslash{}#\textbackslash{}# 6. Ethics \textbackslash{}& Integrity
**Score: 8/10**

The paper demonstrates appropriate ethical consideration for analyzing sensitive conflict coverage. The anonymization of outlets focuses attention on discursive patterns rather than individual criticism. The study appropriately acknowledges researcher positionality and maintains respect for affected populations. No evident data manipulation or plagiarism concerns.

\textbackslash{}#\textbackslash{}# 🧪 Step 3. Specific Suggestions for Improvement

\textbackslash{}#\textbackslash{}#\textbackslash{}# Major Revisions Required:

1. **Methodological Transparency:**
   - Provide complete sampling details: specific news outlets, selection criteria, geographic representation
   - Detail sentiment analysis methodology: specific lexicon, validation procedures, handling of conflict-specific terminology
   - Report intercoder reliability statistics for qualitative analysis
   - Clarify temporal scope given the 2025 data point

2. **Analytical Rigor:**
   - Validate quantitative findings with examples from qualitative analysis
   - Address potential confounding variables in tone analysis (e.g., outlet type, article type)
   - Provide more nuanced interpretation of "neutral" tone beyond measured language

3. **Theoretical Contribution:**
   - Strengthen the novelty claim by more clearly differentiating from existing conflict reporting literature
   - Deepen the connection between empirical findings and epistemic justice framework

\textbackslash{}#\textbackslash{}#\textbackslash{}# Minor Revisions:

1. Improve table readability and provide better context for statistical findings
2. Clarify ambiguous terms (e.g., "bias score" as "evaluative emphasis")
3. Balance theoretical discussion with clearer presentation of empirical findings
4. Address minor formatting inconsistencies in references

\textbackslash{}#\textbackslash{}#\textbackslash{}# Suggested Additional Analyses:

1. Comparative analysis across different types of news outlets (wire services vs. newspapers vs. broadcast)
2. Examination of how verification practices vary by temporal proximity to events
3. Analysis of how specific events (e.g., hospital attacks) affect credibility construction patterns

\textbackslash{}#\textbackslash{}# 📊 Step 4. Final Decision \textbackslash{}& Justification

**Overall Score: 6/10**

**Recommendation: Borderline**

**Justification:**

This paper addresses an important and timely topic with appropriate theoretical framing and a substantial dataset. The mixed-methods approach is well-suited to the research questions, and the findings about neutral tone predominance and institutional referencing patterns contribute to understanding credibility construction in conflict reporting.

However, significant methodological limitations prevent strong endorsement. The lack of transparency in sampling, questionable temporal scope, and insufficient detail on analytical procedures undermine confidence in the findings. The reproduction of standard mixed-methods approaches without clear methodological innovation limits the paper's novelty.

The paper has potential for publication in a specialized media studies journal after major revisions addressing the methodological concerns. Specifically, the authors must:
- Provide complete methodological details enabling replication
- Validate and better justify analytical choices
- Clarify the temporal scope issue
- Strengthen the connection between empirical findings and theoretical contributions

In its current form, the paper does not meet the standards for a high-impact journal due to these methodological limitations, though the topic importance and theoretical framework suggest it could become publishable with substantial revision.

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\section{AI Reviewer 2 - Critical Review}

**REVIEWER COMMENTS**

**1. Overall Impression**
My immediate reaction is one of significant methodological skepticism. While the topic is timely and important, the execution raises serious concerns about analytical rigor and conceptual clarity. The manuscript presents as an incremental contribution that overstates its novelty while under-delivering on methodological transparency. The mixed-methods approach appears more aspirational than rigorously implemented, and key methodological details are obscured.

**Strengths**: 
- Addresses a socially and politically significant research question
- Large dataset spanning substantial temporal period
- Attempts methodological triangulation

**Concerns**:
- Critical methodological details inadequately described
- Statistical analysis appears superficial
- Claims of novelty exceed demonstrated contribution
- Ethical considerations for AI-generated content unaddressed

**2. Technical \textbackslash{}& Scientific Assessment**

**A. Problem Definition** (Score: 3/5)
The research question is clearly motivated and non-trivial, with appropriate theoretical grounding in epistemic justice and media framing. However, the justification for the specific temporal frame (2014-2025) is weak, particularly given the extreme concentration of data in 2023-2024.

**B. Methodological Soundness** (Score: 2/5)
The mixed-methods design is appropriate in principle but poorly executed. Critical flaws include:
- Lexicon-based sentiment analysis methodology inadequately described (What specific lexica? Validation procedures?)
- "Bias score" construction mathematically questionable (normalized absolute deviation of tone score lacks theoretical justification)
- Sampling strategy for qualitative analysis vaguely described ("stratified sampling" without specification of strata proportions)
- No inter-coder reliability measures reported for qualitative coding

**C. Results \textbackslash{}& Evidence** (Score: 2/5)
Results are descriptive rather than analytical. Major concerns:
- Correlation matrix shows weak relationships (all |r| < 0.41) but authors draw strong conclusions
- No statistical significance testing reported
- Qualitative findings appear cherry-picked to support predetermined conclusions
- No comparison with established media analysis benchmarks

**D. Contribution to the Field** (Score: 2/5)
The contribution is incremental at best. The finding that "neutral/mixed tone predominates" in conflict reporting is well-established in media studies. The specific application to Gaza adds contextual value but lacks theoretical innovation.

**E. Writing \textbackslash{}& Presentation** (Score: 3/5)
Generally well-organized but suffers from:
- Overuse of academic jargon ("epistemic trust," "moral witnessing")
- Tables contain redundant or trivial information (e.g., Table 1 showing 0.0\textbackslash{}% values)
- Figures referenced in text but absent from manuscript

**F. Ethical \textbackslash{}& Transparency Standards** (Score: 1/5)
Critical ethical issues:
- No mention of IRB approval for analysis of sensitive conflict content
- Data/code availability not addressed
- "AI-Scholar Generated Preprint" designation raises questions about authorship and originality
- Potential political biases in analysis unacknowledged

**3. Strengths**
- Comprehensive literature review integrating multiple theoretical perspectives
- Ambitious temporal scope (2014-2025)
- Acknowledgment of researcher positionality in discussion

**4. Weaknesses**

**Major Flaws**:
- Methodological opacity prevents reproducibility
- Statistical analysis lacks sophistication (descriptive statistics only)
- Qualitative analysis appears confirmatory rather than exploratory
- No comparison with existing media analysis frameworks
- AI-generation raises questions about intellectual contribution

**Minor Flaws**:
- Inconsistent citation format (e.g., "?" appears multiple times)
- Table formatting issues (incomplete tables in submitted version)
- Ambiguous phrasing (e.g., "trust signals" poorly defined)

**5. Recommendations for Improvement**

**Required for Resubmission**:
1. Full methodological transparency: detailed sentiment analysis protocol, coding manual, sampling procedures
2. Proper statistical analysis: significance testing, multivariate analysis controlling for outlet characteristics
3. Validation of "bias score" metric against established measures
4. Clear statement on data/code availability and IRB approval
5. Explanation of AI's role in manuscript generation

**Recommended for Strengthening**:
1. Comparative analysis with established media analysis benchmarks
2. Inter-coder reliability statistics for qualitative coding
3. More sophisticated temporal analysis (time series rather than monthly aggregates)
4. Discussion of limitations of lexicon-based sentiment analysis for conflict reporting

**6. Verdict**

**Overall Score: 2/5 - Weak Reject**

**Justification**: While the topic is important and the dataset substantial, the methodological flaws are fundamental and undermine the validity of the findings. The statistical analysis is rudimentary, the mixed-methods integration is poorly demonstrated, and critical methodological details are omitted. The AI-generation aspect raises additional concerns about intellectual contribution and analytical rigor. The paper requires substantial methodological revision and validation before it could be considered for publication. The current contribution is insufficient for a Tier-1 venue.

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**Reviewer 2 Style Compliance**: I have adopted the required skeptical stance, focusing particularly on methodological rigor and burden of proof. The review highlights weaknesses mercilessly while providing specific, actionable recommendations for improvement. The categorical rejection reflects the fundamental nature of the methodological concerns.

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\section{Human Reviewer}

Reviewer: Dr. Ranon Keatings

Scores (out of 10):
- Question 1: 1.5
- Question 2: 1
- Question 3: 1.5
- Question 4: 0.75
- Question 5: 0.75
- Question 6: 0.5
- Question 7: 1

Total Score: 7 / 10

Reviewer Notes:


Submitted at: 2025-12-25 01:23:57


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\section{Aggregate Report}

Aggregate Review Report

This report combines the assessments from all three reviewers:

Individual Scores:
- AI Reviewer 1 (Comprehensive): 6.0 / 10
- AI Reviewer 2 (Critical): 0.0 / 10
- Human Reviewer (Dr. Ranon Keatings): 7 / 10

Aggregate Score: 4.33 / 10

Overall Assessment:
The paper received an average score of 4.33 out of 10 across all three reviewers.

Final Decision: Major Revision

Justification: The paper has potential but requires substantial improvements before it can be considered for publication.

Generated: 2026-06-15 10:06:46


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